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| A Certain Friday Night |
This is the story of a boy who wishes to take his dream girl out dancing. He watches her all day during school, and the girl pays him no attention ever until a certain Friday night. Marvin finally manages to conjure up the confidence to finally ask her our. He approaches Emily's front door nervously awaiting their special night. She then opens the door surprised and confused. Not knowing what to say Emily accepts his offer in attempts to be polite (Dyptich 1). Internally excited Marvin then escorts Emily to a local dance studio. They stand awkwarding waiting for eachother to make the first move. When suddenly Marvin wisks her away and they have a night full of dancing. When Emily notices what a great time she's actually having she lets go and enjoy's herself (Dyptich 2). The night is coming to an end and Marvin returns Emily to her house with a special lily in tow. Emily however does not react to the flower like Marvin wished. She then dismisses the evening and bolts in her house. Leaving poor Marvin all alone on a certain Friday night (Dyptich 3).
I really like that the lighting is the same in all the pictures. The second one is my favorite, however I don't like that Marvin is alittle cut off in the picture on the right. Also, in the first set of pictures, I think you should have had the girl place her hand differently becuase she doesn't excatly look like she's holding a doorknob. overall, I think it came out good and you portrayed the story well.
ReplyDeleteYour images are strong from a technical stand point, probably the best I've seen so far. With such an involved story line though, I think you would have benefited from notes and thumbnails. Your models reacted well to your direction but some shots could have been done differently with some care in planning.
ReplyDeletei really like how all three of the dyptichs revolve around one theme. i really like how all the pics came out except for the second pic of Emily in the first set, cause she lookes like she's about to punch Marvin
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